Talk:Lord MuuMuu/@comment-32887333-20170528233714

I don't mean to come off harsh on you at all, that, and I know I am no sort of admin either quite the opposite really, but perhaps you could do a few things. For example, in terms of formatting, you could have some sort of separation between your abilities and where you start talking about the Hammer, for example, you can have it be equipment. If your character is really skilled in the usage of their Hammer and you want to talk about that, you can have maybe a small section for Hammer Proficiency, where you talk about all their skills with the hammer. In fact, just another form of advice, you could use Physical Abilities as your first section, and Hammer Proficiency as another under abilities. It should help make your work look a tad bit more professional. Your character has potential, probably overlooked potential at that, but I think it's always easier to write and expand on a character once you set up proper sections/sectioning/headings.

If you ever need help (though I won't be around for the next week and five days), when I am actually around I'll be willing.


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