Talk:Ōga Kaisei/@comment-25152698-20180628025325

Yo Alph, nice to see you work so diligently on this page and all, but before you go any farther with it, I just want you to keep in mind that our site is just a tad bit different than probably any of those you've been on in the past few years.

Since we're a conjoined universe and all, we tend to value the plot over all else. And while I'm not directly accusing you of anything, it's less impressive to see pages that are so gaudy in length, especially when the character has yet to debut in role-play.

You have a knack for sitting down and piecing together lots of information at once; why not use that enthusiasm and passion and gear it towards role-playing? If you were to apply for a position with this guy or an article similar to this one, you would actually be denied. Not because the administration has anything against you or sees you as not being worthy, but rather because at present, this character means absolutely nothing to our lore, lol.

This character is technically filler, non-canon, and at current, virtually nonexistent. If you're doing this for yourself, then by means, have at it and keep breaking all records imaginable by getting this article to an obscene measurement of bytes. But that won't impress us at all, sad to say, nor will it contribute to this character's renown.

I would much rather like to see you involve yourself with other users and definitely encourage you to chase plot, pursue role-playing and develop a character that way rather than run after the bytes.

Because I was once very much like you Alph, and seeing your writing, especially the style in which you write, it reminds me of an awful lot like my past self. And you know what sucks, Alph? No one, legit, no one is going to bother to read this page from top to bottom because it just looks like a redundant sea of words, lol.

The goal should always be to deliver deliver information in as few, concise statements as possible (which, I know, is contradicting given the length of this comment) but I hope I've gotten my point across to you.

20k byte character who's been apart of a role-play > 100k byte character who has never debuted