Talk:Alessandra/@comment-25152698-20170311222514

I like the outline you have thus far, Aga (as a matter of fact, I love it), but before you tread any farther with the advancements to her page, do you mind fixing up some of the grammar?

Also, there are a few inconsistencies worth pointing out here; excuse my being so blunt, but it's almost as though logic is being entirely thrown out of the window, lol. Why would the giants who had kept her as a prisoner for oh-so long experience a change of heart so suddenly and take her as their empress? Next to that, it was mentioned in this week's chapter that Elbaf actually has a military, and a very formidable one at that. For the sake of your story, however, perhaps we can say that that army dwindled over time, and that she perhaps helped piece it back together.

I'll leave you with two things: an invitation to join a role-play I'm planning and a possibility to tie in her origins as a slave to your much desired position as ruler of Elbaf. Inspired again, by this week's chapter, why not have her marry into Elbaf's royalty? Love is just about the one thing you can never question in this world, so you couldn't entirely wrong even a giant for falling in love with someone that's majestically beautiful. To me, I think that more than makes up for her conversion from slave to empress (0 to 100 real quick).