Talk:Vulcan Victoria/@comment-21119641-20150524163359

Hey there Sting, just gonna point out something I noticed!

"Victoria is an outwardly calm and confident person. She speaks in an archaic, old form of Japanese. Befitting her speech, she is very mature and wishes that the people around her act accordingly. However, during a recent bout with the Titan Pirate Dahlia Simmons, Victoria showed a sadistic side of herself, purposely keeping the woman within the boundaries of her abilities when she could easily have removed and defeated her, whilst at the same time continually beating and striking her with both her body and powers despite the woman's inability to fight back. Even after the battles around her had finished and her squad had won, Victoria showed no remorse for what she had done, and instead held kept on battering the girl, and finished by holding the swordswoman's bruised body up in a trophy-like manner, smiling at her own victory. In battle, Victoria enjoys sadistically toying with her opponents. She even expresses torturing people and slaves as acts of "boredom", showing no remorse for them at all."

This all seems to be copied from from here ^-^' of course you changed the names and all. This from the first two.

"Just like her father, she views herself and the rest of the World Government as the most powerful force on the planet and believes lesser beings to be nothing more than "trash". Victoria also doesn't hesistate in taking a hostage to achieve the ends to her own means, even if the hostage is a comrade, or her opponent's friends or allies.

When her enemies manage to thwart her significantly, Victoria's usual cold, smug attitude gives way to anger. She will seek to avenge herself from such humiliations when given the opportunity. Also, due to the cruelty of her father's upbringing, Victoria desires to be in a position of superiority. She thus shows that she doesn't feel any loyalty towards anyone that cannot stay on top and also that she doesn't care whether or not she is working on the right side of the law. She thinks very highly of herself and wishes for others to treat her as such."

This here as well, it was copied from the rest of her personality and you just substituted things to match with the OPverse.

So sorry Sting but that would be considered plagiarism :\ I would like to ask you to rewrite it all with your own words really if you want to keep this type of personality. Just don't copy from the main FT wiki. Thanks for your attention :) if you need anything just ask me.