Talk:Muircetach Auberon/@comment-26821267-20150801190837

I really don't see how this person could have learned any of the Rokushiki, much less four techniques, without receiving formal Marine training, Even if your character somehow learned it from observation and experience during his fight with Marines, it seems really really unlikely that he could have mastered any Rokushiki techniques. It makes Rokushiki seem like something really common, when it is supposed to be the trump card of the Marine soldiers, especially those in CP9. Even Luffy only managed to apply the fundamental idea of one technique to enhance his fighting style, which is fine to me, but to have a random pirate master 4 techniques? Even Blueno of CP9 said it was unheard of for a pirate to have commanded even one of their techniques, so I seriously doubt that your character could have done this. I really think you should consider that more carefully, because your character comes across as really unrealistic, especially since there's other issues with him, like how he learned Santoryu when it was a craft Zoro himself made up. Besides that, he has a really powerful devil fruit already, and yet you still give him Santoryu, which took Zoro his entire life to fully master, and he also devoted his entire training to mastering Santoryu. I really think you gotta take another look at this guy and seriously consider some changes maybe. I dunno, that's just my opinion